Still hurting

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paul123
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Still hurting

Postby paul123 » Mon Jan 03, 2011 4:36 pm

I can’t stand to fly
I’m not that naive
I’m just out to find
The better part of me

I’m more than a bird...i’m more than a plane
More than some pretty face beside a train
It’s not easy to be me

Wish that I could cry
Fall upon my knees
Find a way to lie
About a home I’ll never see

It may sound absurd...but don’t be naive
Even heroes have the right to bleed
I may be disturbed...but won’t you concede
Even heroes have the right to dream
It’s not easy to be me

Up, up and away...away from me
It’s all right...you can all sleep sound tonight
I’m not crazy...or anything...

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Postby Obayan » Mon Jan 03, 2011 11:52 pm

Hi. I really liked reading your poem. Did you know we have a section here called "artwork" that includes poetry? You might want to share it in there with others who share the same interests. Might get some interesting feedback. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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paul123
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Postby paul123 » Tue Jan 04, 2011 9:21 am

Thank you I will check it out. It wasn't a poem its a feeling of still hurting. The words are the lyrics from the song superman by five for fighting.

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Postby crystalgaze » Sat Jan 08, 2011 5:46 am

If you're still hurting, do you know what is hurting you?


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