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Hey guys this is the first time im going public with my work, pleas comment and tell me what you think.

I wrote this for an older women who i love so much, but its hard for us to see each other because we live so far apart...

missing you,
helps me see,
that me and you,
were meant to be.

Just one night,
was not enough,
being without you,
is just too tough.

I live through this hell,
i call a life,
battle through,
the pain and strife.

to see your face,
just once again,
woud bring me joy,
until the end...