when to stop saying I love you

[creaker]

when i move to kiss your cheek, you pull away
when i touch your shoulder, you shrug off my hand
when i say goodnight, you don't respond
when i arrive or leave, you don't meet my eyes
when i say i love you, where do the words go?

[JonsDragonEyes]

I like the way you write. I hope you keep doing so.

[creaker]

Thank you!

[4EverMe]

Hi creaker,
I read this poem a while back and I liked it.
Forgot to tell you so...

It's a small but effective expression- a lot said, but with very few words.

[I am Larry]

when i move to kiss your cheek, you pull away
when i touch your shoulder, you shrug off my hand
when i say goodnight, you don't respond
when i arrive or leave, you don't meet my eyes
when i say i love you, where do the words go?

Yes. This is unlove. I have felt it before. It hurts but we see it coming.