skin and ears

[shmuel]

Just a few fleeting thoughts about how visually obsessed our world is... would be great to just use our ears for a day or maybe more.

Just for today,lets close our eyes.
Just for today an end to our lies.
Lets not taste,smell or touch.
Let`s be simply skin and ears.
Share our warmth, our fears?
Just for today,lets close our eyes.

Just for today let`s be naked.
Just for today no need to hide
No one sees, smells or touches.
So no need for old time blushes
Just for today,skin and ears
Just for today, lets close our eyes

[Emotional_77]

That's really nice shmuel

[Warmsoul/Jeanie13]

(((((((( shmuel )))))))))))))))))

Wow! Did you write that?

Nicely done.

Warmie/Jenie13

[shmuel]

thanks for your comments Emotional_77 and Warmsoul/Jeanie13.
Much appreciated...
Just one afterthought from me which might help a bit to understand what I`m trying to say with my poem.
"close our eyes" does not mean hiding

[Emotional_77]

*hugs shmuel*

[Katietron]

Its kind of inappropriate right now, but it seems like everyone here has a talent. I´m envious.

The poem/lyrics are great!

[Emotional_77]

katietron that makes two of us!!

[MoMac]

make that 3 of us!

[Warmsoul/Jeanie13]

((((((((((((( Katietron )))))))))))))))

You are alone. I don't a talented bone in my body.

((((((((((((((((( shmuel ))))))))))))) just a hug for you.

Warmie/Jeanie

[JudeB]

You have the sign of a good poet.
This poem latched onto something in me.
Not sure what it means to me yet, but it will become clearer in time.

Also, Warmsoul DOES have a talent!
Making comments that warm the hearts of others is DEFINITELY a talent!

[JudeB]

Hey All! Everyone has a talent of some kind. We just have to find a way to express it.

hugs to you all!

[hey-its-ok]

yeah this poem latched into something in me too... but can't put my finger on it... humm... very abstract... but nice....