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Creator
Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2013 5:37 pm
by sherrie
Born in sorrow
The seed sown
I live and breath
She mourns
Would that she could undo
anything to forget
she cannot
I breath
fight
strive
Why??
Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2013 8:22 pm
by fallen
i love your poem.
born in sorrow,
the seed falls,
spring comes.
the tree grows,
the tree mourns,loneliness.
the seeds' fall,
spring comes,
a forest grows,
emptiness is lost.
hope you have a better day
take care
Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2013 8:31 pm
by Alaska1958
Good question. But I'm curious as to why the subject heading is "creator"?
I'm a big fan of the idea of evolution and it would appear that there was no imperative for us to be happy. Some even suggest that there is an advantage in having depressive traits in our genes.
Why struggle? Good question, I suppose it's obvious enough that without struggle our species would never have made it this far. Still, in the environment we have created for ourselves our natural tendencies have not adapted very well yet.
Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2013 4:51 pm
by sherrie
Beautiful reply @fallen thank you xoxoxo
Alaska, the "creator" is my mum. She makes me emotional sometimes very angry mad.
Sherrie