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Hommede lyric: Shut up and keep up

Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 4:17 pm
by Zequr
They can't get their voices out, can't use the right they own
They can't get their feeling out, It keeps weighing them down

Insteed of puching it out they push it in
Insteed ot accepting the facts, they collect the sin
Can not free their hearts, living on their shattered minds
Can not obtain what they need to get, so they enjoy other kinds

Mindless throbbing, mindless throbbing, mindless love

Pices of mind all over the place
Keep your mouth shut and keep up the pace
Pices of humanity getting forever lost
But survival does what it must!

Mindless throbbing, mindless throbbing, mindless love
Mindless throbbing, mindless throbbing, for feelings never gone

Somone should see them, force them to ressurect
Somone should stand up, ignoring what they can get
Somone could help them, prevent the fate they fare
But the prices of using them seem to be to rare

Breath in, breath out, breat out, breath in, breath in, breath out
Shut up and keep up the pace

Maybe it isn't so bad, maybe it's what we do
Maybe you can ask, anyone to die with you
All people i've asked have some major loss
Can it be that shattering is something everyone does?

It's just a question of vision?

Insteed of puching it out they push it in
Insteed ot accepting the facts they collect the sin
Can not free their hearts, living on their shattered minds
Can not obtain what they need to get, so they enjoy other kinds...

Mindless...
Mindless...

Shut up and keep up the pace!

***Copyright by Zequr***

good job

Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 9:22 am
by true-blue
my favorite lines are....
"Mindless throbbing, mindless throbbing, mindless love
Mindless throbbing, mindless throbbing, for feeling never gone"

you were certainly writing what was on my mind. i envy you tho in your ability to express anger. i can't seem to do it and until i do i know i am struck. but keep up the good work. i love reading the poety on this site and your stuff is very interesting.
true-blue (Nora)

Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 9:39 am
by Zequr
Thank you true-blue. I warms to see that someone enjoy my dark poems.

Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 3:01 pm
by Emotional_77
You really seem to be interested in poetry :)

*hugs you*

Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 12:03 pm
by Zequr
Hmm I don't know if i am. It's a way to express my worries more than anything else.

Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:10 pm
by Warmsoul/Jeanie13
(((((((((((((((((Zequr))))))))))))))))

Keep sharing please.

Warmie 8)