Breaking up with depression

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Breaking up with depression

Postby Kiara » Sun May 19, 2013 11:02 am

Dear depression,

With lots of faith,
And a little heart of hope,
I wish to bid you
An amicable adieu.
Sorry its over, I couldn't cope.
I fell for happiness:
My lovely new beau.

You walked with me all these years,
And hand-in-hand,
I stood by you.
You showered me with fake fears and true tears
From a make-believe magical land.
But now, I'm done with you.
Sorry, I found someone new.

Pardon me my past with you,
There is no regret.
Forgive me my lack of life,
My future shall never fret.
Let me free your soul
From within my heart's core,
And hand-in-hand again,
Walk your feet to the door.

I wish you luck to grieve my loss
And guide you through the pain.
For me, I'd be my own little boss
And take a chance to dance again.
No more of being friends:
I'd make my being scream...
All I ever want is to forgive and forget
You forever as a bad beautiful dream...

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Postby nenkohai » Sun May 19, 2013 4:15 pm

bravo, Kiara!

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Postby dougsan » Mon May 20, 2013 6:13 pm

Lovely words. Enjoyable to read and I so hope they reflect your truth forever. Congrats.
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Postby Av » Thu May 23, 2013 12:29 pm

Beautiful! :)
"Even mountains have life, it's just that their lifespan is way longer than ours."

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Postby djr » Fri May 24, 2013 8:41 am

Well said :D

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Postby Kiara » Sun May 26, 2013 1:48 am

Thank you everyone...but I am not there yet...hope everyone does!

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Postby Tired » Sun Jun 01, 2014 11:11 pm

That was nice to read :).

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Postby hope101 » Thu Jun 26, 2014 4:11 pm

its great :)

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