The first of my namless poems.

[Nankurunaisa]

It's a nameless poem because I can't name it. Yes I did take the first two lines from "Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner" But I'm using mine in a metaphorical sense as he used his in the literal. Furthermore I wasn't aware of that poem when I made those lines and the context is different, so it's not plagiarism. So enough of my yap here it is:

Water Water everywhere,
But not a drop for me.
I took a drop and here I am,
Seething in misery.

Opposed in turn by everyone,
Who took a drop from thee.
Happiness did beseech them,
And rise them from the sea.

O yes, how I did see them,
How the air did fill with glee.
And then, of course, I realized,
That,
This life's just not for me.

[Warmsoul/Jeanie13]

((((((((((((((((((( Nankurunaisa)))))))))))))))))))))))

Thank you....

Warmie

[shmuel]

Thanks Nankurunaisa... looking forward to more of your poems.
I hope you`ll post them here... I love this sort of stuff... the longer the better

[true-blue]

i really enjoyed your poem and feel you have a special gift. i look forward to reading many more from you! hugs, true-blue