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Postby jj » Tue Dec 18, 2012 9:08 pm

I look to the sky and pray that tonight I will sleep and wake up anew. But each time I close my eyes all I see is you and your emasculated skeleton haunting my dreams you don't belong here can you not hear my screams? You've played your tricks and ruined some lives what is left?... time to die?... I draw out the knife nestled under my breast I raise it and strike it right into your chest, plunge it down deep till I feel your heart burst, hoping this knife will leave your soul cursed. Now, I seek revenge and leave you there dead in a puddle of blood surrounding your head. I'm at peace now I know where you've gone, to an eternity of suffering where no light has shone.


In death you will suffer the pain of regret, a lifetime of torment your debt to be met.

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Postby jj » Tue Dec 18, 2012 9:10 pm

I was just free writing and this came out. Um maybe I should verify that I haven't killed anyone... I guess I just created a story or something from some bad feelings I was having.

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Postby JoeFriend » Wed Dec 19, 2012 4:29 pm

Awesome! I'm always glad to see poetry. And especially when it has a rhyme scheme!

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Postby inrecovery2011 » Thu Dec 20, 2012 3:35 pm

jj i have the wish to do that to a few people in my dreams i have been so troubled with nightmares and flashbacks of the past i try to keep them to myself but they drag me down so easy and quickly
I might not be where i want to be but i am where i am supposed to be

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Postby jj » Thu Jun 20, 2013 12:31 pm

My words came true and now my dad is dead.
Raise your words, not voice. It is rain that grows flowers, not thunder. --Rumi

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Postby Frame » Thu Jun 20, 2013 12:37 pm

I'm so Sorry JJ, for your Dad's passing.


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