JustBlah's Writing

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Postby BlueGobi » Wed Dec 12, 2012 1:52 pm

Voices


You say you want my poetry,
The artwork lost inside of me,
But I find none.

You ask me what's my destiny,
As if my eyes would lie to me,
I am undone.

You give me hope, just when mine fails,
A fresh spring breeze to fill my sails,
And I find hope.

You are the best and worst inside,
The little voice, that I can't hide,
With which, I can cope.

My thanks my friends inside my head,
For everything you do.
I fear I never would have found myself,
if I hadn't found you.

;)

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Postby inrecovery2011 » Thu Dec 13, 2012 8:40 am

I really like what you wrote. I feel that way often. Thank you for sharing :)
I might not be where i want to be but i am where i am supposed to be

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Postby JoeFriend » Wed Dec 19, 2012 4:34 pm

Wow... I am in awe! Great rhyme scheme. Great emotion. To put it simply. It was great.

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Postby inrecovery2011 » Thu Dec 20, 2012 3:37 pm

JustBlah you have wonderful writing skills saying things that you feel in a way others can relate great job thank you for sharing
I might not be where i want to be but i am where i am supposed to be

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Postby Kiara » Sun May 26, 2013 2:02 am

Lovely, crisp, simple and beautiful.....

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Postby dougsan » Sun May 26, 2013 2:36 am

What else can be said. Thank you.
A leaf falls, lonliness
e.e. cummings

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Postby hollyann » Sun May 26, 2013 3:09 am

((((JustBlah))))


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