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i hate ducks.
from distance they're fairly ok i guess.
you can walk among them in a sense, and be fairly comfortable at that.
but once they're closing in on you, well then they arnt such a nice species anymore.
if truth to be told, they annoy the living shit out of me.
just look at them, they look ridiculous for chrissake!

this is the first poem i ever constructed. be brutally honest with me. i really need constructive criticism. pls

move a limb, be suprised.
move two limbs, and you're making f****** progress all right.
dont think about it too much though.
you might want to think about just a little bit, you dont want to be a moron after all.
just dont overthink it, that's all i'm saying.

my poetry kind of sucks.
i'm sure, it cant even be called poetry.
but what the hell, who gives a shit anyway.
i'm doing my best.

god damn, what would i do for some wit and intuitive thinking.
i'd do alot, i can tell you that much.
but my neurons arnt closely connected and that side of my brain is at rest.
so what can i do?
well i can pace back and fourth.
and continue writing shit.
who knows, maybe i'll finally write something swell.
yeah sure you will.

(((((((((((((skh)))))))))))) thank you for sharing your thoughts. You are braver than I. Hope you continue doing this.

Thank you again

Warmie