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Anyone like poetry, thought it might be nice:)

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 10:40 pm
by daniel444
I feel pretty poopy but I can't help the constant flow of writing in my head so I was wondering maybe I can make someone else feel better.

I do not understand, the things that makes my life so bland.
But while I contemplate my pain, that is driving me insane.
I can maybe give to you, a little something maybe new.
To all you who are feeling low, I wish I could say hello.
Because I care a whole lot, about how you might have a dark thought.
And to you I gift this rhyme, to hopefully return you to your prime.
And maybe this might distract, me from my own dark fact.

well there you have it, not one of my masterpieces but i've got nothing better to do...

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 12:39 am
by daniel444
what happens when your broken heart
begins to fall apart
but when you go to put it back
you forgot to fill a crack
and then when you think your troubles did cease
but you found you lost a piece

Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 8:58 pm
by upanddowngirl
This is good way to express feelings. Thanks, I think I will try to write again.