It doesn't matter

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AnneW
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It doesn't matter

Postby AnneW » Sat Feb 03, 2018 3:10 pm

It doesn't matter
what I do.
It all boils down
to the pit of it all;
that one factual
notion,
that one earnest reality,
that one natural
thing.
The dastardly dreary
and dreadful thing.

No light, no air, no no not ever.
Not nice, not now, not why
not never.
No more, you see, that thing
I thung; that thwarting
twisted towering ting.

It doesn't matter what I do
for without you there's nothing.
Not now, no how, no way
not ever!

He took you away and everything with you.
I'm broken and bumpled and bangled and bruised.

It doesn't matter what I do,
For my life has no meaning.
I am without you.

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Olive
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Re: It doesn't matter

Postby Olive » Sun Feb 04, 2018 3:49 am

*snaps fingers*


(a poet thing ^.^)

I love your rhythm

~Olive
~Olive

AnneW
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Re: It doesn't matter

Postby AnneW » Sun Feb 04, 2018 4:07 pm

Thank-You Olive! I'm no poet; I'm aware of that. Sometimes these things just pour out of me! Love your pic! You're beautiful!!!
\m/ <3

8) Emily

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Olive
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Re: It doesn't matter

Postby Olive » Sun Feb 04, 2018 4:40 pm

I spent time in school studying poetry and erm, the pretentiousness of academic poets and their students can be soul-crushing. (And kinda laughable) I much more respect the art that just flows out then the poorly studied and contrived poetry of someone that doesn’t recognize a sonnet when they’re reading one ;D

They seem a lot like lyrics ^.^ Do you think you’ll set them to music??

And ty ^.^
~Olive

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Re: It doesn't matter

Postby AnneW » Mon Feb 05, 2018 2:44 am

Thank-You Olive! Perhaps I will! I can't sleep for a song in my head! I want to play guitar but I'm afraid I'll wake my Husband! Instead I'm here talking to you! You seem to me to be a ray of sunshine. You certainly are to me at this moment!
I'm grateful!
I should post my "Ode to Gesso." It's kinda funny....
Be Well! (BTW-used to live in your area)
Peace and Love and Big Warm Hugs!
Anne \m/ Rock on!

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Olive
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Re: It doesn't matter

Postby Olive » Mon Feb 05, 2018 6:36 am

Thanks ^.^ It’s so great how just a few sentences of text can brighten someone’s day a bit :)

And oi, I hate when I start writing a song when I am in no place to be able to pick up my guitar. At least you get to listen to the song for a bit ^.€ It’d keep me entertained at work when I could listen to my own songs in my head anyways.

And ^.^ *hugs* hope you got some sleep and hope you have a nice day :)
~Olive


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