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MechanicalFlesh
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Postby MechanicalFlesh » Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:02 pm

Immersed in the uncomfortable irony
Burning away undesired tendencies
Resistance no longer leads
The dependent to the grim edge
It is the undying strength
That pushes the boundries
Of perceptive misconceptions
Connect the maddening nature
To the missed origin
Align the path again
And be please with struggle
The essence of survival
Embellished by the mass of misery
Revived by the unfelt emotions

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Warmsoul/Jeanie13
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Postby Warmsoul/Jeanie13 » Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:47 pm

(((((((((((((( MechanicalFlesh ))))))))))))))

And be please with struggle
The essence of survival


Of course we read things in our own manner, but those two lines, hit a cord with me. Thank you.

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Shealyn
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Postby Shealyn » Tue Jul 06, 2010 11:32 pm

:)
it seems like you have looked at things differently today mech.

im happy for you.

i truly hope you can keep holding onto this feeling

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Postby Obayan » Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:36 am

I would love to hear more mech. :)

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Postby Warmsoul/Jeanie13 » Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:52 pm

Me too! :D


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