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Tantalus
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A few I've written

Postby Tantalus » Wed Jun 23, 2010 3:41 pm

Comments would be appreciated :)

The Still Flyer

The flash of a camera
The sunset in the sky
The Playing card flying
And the secretly whispered lie

The guitar sounding
The crash of thunder
The hinged door closing
And the worlds biggest wonder

The growing grass
The small birds singing
The pink blossom forming
And the summer is coming

He will fly
He will fly
Until the night draws near
He will fly
He will fly
Into the night time fear

The Morning singing
The bright sun rising
All the Children happy
And the one still flying

Alone he stands
On the edge of the hill
His machine still flying
While he is stood still

His machine comes to rest
Landing gently by his side
He starts to return home
To sit and hide

Soon he is seen
Again on the hill
His machine still flying
And he is stood still

One finds it a mystery
The man on the hill
Stood there quietly
Not moving, just still.

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My Apology

Strange how things can change in an instant
Everything so close then suddenly distant
I know it’s my fault, I shouldn’t run away
But I am a coward and it fears me to stay

I do stupid things without thinking
Nothing I can blame on you or my drinking
I want to say sorry but no one believes me
Feels strange that us all used to be ‘we’

I am a t**t and I know that is true
You have every reason so speak as you do
I know saying sorry doesn’t make it all right
I still feel I’m falling from a great height

I know that I am Different, I know I’m not the same
But that’s not something I can use to take the blame
I hope you forgive me, I know what I’ve done
I understand if you don’t, if you turn and run

This is the most difficult thing that I’ve ever wrote
Too much emotion all in one note
It’s a Crazy Life with Crazy rules
This is why I write, these are my fuels.

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A Thank to a friend

I need to thank a friend
Who hugged me when I was down
Gave me a Shoulder to cry on

I need to thank a friend
Who could always make me laugh
Laugh until we cried

I need to thank a friend
For making me second to none
I finally felt like one

I need to thank a friend
For Being there
When I needed You

I need to thank a friend
Thank You xxx

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Enjoy :)

Tantalus xx

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Postby Obayan » Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:35 pm

Keep writing hon! I love reading this.

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Postby Tantalus » Mon Jun 28, 2010 1:45 pm

I posted this one in the chatroom so I might as well post it here too:

Forgotten

All alone in this world as if I were forgotten
A discarded piece of fruit left to go rotten
All I wish is to go back to when I was remembered
But all I am now is mentally dismembered


Enjoy, if you can enjoy something that morbid!

Tanta xx

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Postby Obayan » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:10 pm

You know what you do with brown bananas? Make bread pudding! What a wonderful desert made from something gone too far the ripe mark.

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Postby Warmsoul/Jeanie13 » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:57 pm

(((((((((((( Tantalus ))))))))))))))))

Your thoughts, thank you for sharing.

P.S. I make banana bread...

Warmie


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