Just one poem ...

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Dexter
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Just one poem ...

Postby Dexter » Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:36 pm

There in these plains
nothing is the way it stands
yet it seems ok
but who can see whats inside of it
there nobody knows why it is
yet recognize the way it is

what made it feel like that
being able to understand
knowing others pain
yet itself feels something else
what changed it to this
seeing things with eyes clearly

was there anything to begin with
the speck of light and dark
nothingness was found
eternal yet unliving
it's lost and wondering
what is the right way to be

Obayan
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Postby Obayan » Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:35 pm

Very nice Dexter! Thank you for sharing this with us.

Dexter
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Postby Dexter » Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:11 am

Thanks obaya,this was first poem i tried : )

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Postby Obayan » Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:01 am

Keep it up. I know I'd really like to hear more.

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Postby Warmsoul/Jeanie13 » Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:19 am

(((((((((((( Dexter ))))))))))))))))

First time? Excellent!!! Thank you for sharing and I truly hope you will continue to do so.

Warmie


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