why didn't i notice?

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Corey
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why didn't i notice?

Postby Corey » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:40 am

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 4:23 pm

Why didn't i notice?

Why didn't i notice when you walked away?
Why didn't i listen to what you had to say?
Why didn't i notice when you weren't there anymore?
Why didn't i notice when you closed that door?
Why didn't i notice?

Why didn't i notice when you wouldn't talk?
Why didn't i notice when you couldn't walk?
Why didn't i notice when the good-bye came?
Why didn't i notice when you stopped playing the game?
Why didn't i notice?

Why didn't i notice you the times you helped me?
Why didn't i notice that you wanted just wanted to be?
Why didn't i notice the person you are?
Why didn't i notice that from afar?
Why didn't i notice?

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LThomas
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Postby LThomas » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:40 am

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 4:57 pm

(((((((((((((corey)))))))))))))))

xxx Lisa xxx

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Tigger
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Postby Tigger » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:41 am

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 6:33 pm

(((((((((((((((((Corey)))))))))))))))) glad you are writing here
Love
Tigger
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Postby Stephen » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:42 am

Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 8:33 pm

(((((Corey)))))))

Love the poem. It made me think, and reflect about past relationships. It's so true you don't know and appreciate how things are when you're so close to a situation/relationship. "You never know what you've got until it's gone."

There's a lesson to be learnt there for me somewhere. Regrets. :D

Stephen.

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Postby Warmsoul/Jeanie13 » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:43 am

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 4:49 am

(((((((((((((((((Corey))))))))))))))))))

Oh sweetie, how wonderful, how sad. Brought tears to my eyes. Thank you so much for sharing. God what a gift, proud to say this talented person by the name of Corey is my friend.

(((((((((((((((((Stephen)))))))))))))))

How true! Cherish what we have, make good memories, love a lot, laugh a lot, and hug a lot. What you have will never be "gone" then. :)

Love to both of you,

Warmie

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Postby flossy » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:44 am

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 3:31 pm

(((((((((((((((coreysis)))))))))))))) Great poem hun! Its so good to see you writing again and hope to see much more :D

love,

flossy *hugs*

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Postby Warmsoul/Jeanie13 » Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:45 am

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 4:43 pm

((((((((((((((((Corey))))))))))))))))))))

Best be more for you have me "hooked".

((((((((((((((((((((Myflossy))))))))))))))))))))

Just good to see you, where you been??

Love to both of you

Warmie

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