A dark cloud

[Obayan]

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[Warmsoul/Jeanie13]

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Wow, it best be continued!! Write and try to get things published, please.

Warmie

[Obayan]

Heh, trying my hand at a romance novel (which i despise reading but finding i like to create).

[Warmsoul/Jeanie13]

Hey, you got my attention, LOL.

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well obayan i clicked on this in the top postings on the front page ,,and as i read i turned cold ,and was very upset at your apparent loss ,,it was touching in a way that could only be a product of a tradegy ,your loss ,,
then i saw warmies response and was a little unburdened to know it was your ,literal mind ,and was not a cry in the dark ,,or was it ? to write something like that however breif must have come from the pain deep inside the very pain we all hold within our souls ,and then i could see it was posted under art,work ,,witch again made me feel better ,,,it did indeed touch me ,and i was prepareing to reply to your loss with a very heart felt message ,,we are all given gifts ,some of us dont find them ,,
maybe you have yours ,,,,,hope im right ? hugs obayan,,lots of love ken xxx

[Obayan]

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[Warmsoul/Jeanie13]

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Ok, I am hooked! More please, and write faster??

Warmie

[Obayan]

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[Obayan]

Ken, parts of it does touch in reality. My husband's middle name was Kenneth and he was truely the love of my life. And when he died, my world ended. My dad (wealthy retired surgeon) actually did build a house similar to the one described as Kath's home for his third (or was it second) wife. And I did grow up on a horse ranch with my adopted family. So although this is far from being a biography, there is some truth even in fiction.

Thank you for the encouragement.

Jeanie, this fast enough for ya?

Will I get totally pounded if I admit this is a first draft? Not even an outline done? I just sit down and this is what comes out. A few minutes later i have a post. Hardest part is getting the time to sit and actually write it down.

[Warmsoul/Jeanie13]

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I am loving it. Thank you!!! I only have one concern.

This is really, really, REALLY, good work/writing. Grabs your attention and holds it. My concern is writing where anyone can, God fore-bide, could copy it and use it as their own work/writing. Seriously Lady, this is fantastic work you are putting down and sharing.

Being selfish I want it to continue, but being safe from your stand point of things. Just a thought.

But, thank you so much, for what I have read so far.

Fantastic, wonderful, attention grabber, leaves you wanting more, straight to the heart, oh hell this is damn good!!!

Warmie

[Obayan]

That settles it. I'm submitting it for publication.

[Warmsoul/Jeanie13]

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Yeah for you, and I want a copy of the book!!

Jeanie

[Obayan]

How about each chapter as it comes ready to read so i can get some feedback and critisizm? don't mock the spelling though. LOL

[Warmsoul/Jeanie13]

Cool, now the chapter concerning me. Vivacious, beautiful, charming, wise, turquoise blue eyes, the lightest of color of hair that shine in the sun. Oh wait, you would need to describe me, right? Well scratch that!

LOL

Would hate to see the talent you share being claimed by another.

I am excited...get busy with those words.

Warmie/Jeanie