Night Time

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Justin2
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Joined: Sun Jan 31, 2010 12:49 am
Location: Paducah, Kentucky

Night Time

Postby Justin2 » Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:24 pm

Night Time

Darkness overwhelms
The sky's turn a teal blue
Orange and pink appear for only the second time today
and maybe some clouds too.

Heat dissipates.
The sun dyes down
The moon comes up
And cold seeps into the town.

Some animals turn in
Some animals turn out
Prey fears as predators lurk
As sheep are count.

This is the night
Let your dreams be good
As the Furnace burns bright
As your life should.

-Justin

Mel234
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Joined: Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:16 am
Location: Minnesota

Postby Mel234 » Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:20 pm

(((((Justin)))))

This is really good! I especially love the last part.

:)

Justin2
Posts: 23
Joined: Sun Jan 31, 2010 12:49 am
Location: Paducah, Kentucky

Postby Justin2 » Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:27 pm

(((mel)))

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!


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