Shattered Life

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AndreaCoe
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Shattered Life

Postby AndreaCoe » Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:32 am

Everything once up fell
Gone to obliviation
The feeling of uselessness
The urges to breathe

The beatless moments
Spent trying to be heard
Unheard crys for help
Trying to live

As life flows
Your the grey circle
In the middle of it all
You need some love

After searching far and wide you soon relise you have noone.
You find nothing.....

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crystalgaze
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Location: USA

Postby crystalgaze » Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:41 am

A shattered life can be made whole again. Just don't give up yet!

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ematron
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Postby ematron » Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:43 am

Very well written. Feel better, though. D:


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