Good Morning Sunshine

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AnneW
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Good Morning Sunshine

Postby AnneW » Sat Feb 03, 2018 2:52 pm

Good Morning Sunshine
though I can't see you at all.
Remember the days when you
knocked on my door?

Chit-chatting and ambling
and singing a song,
whenever will you come along?

It's so terribly dark and cold in this place.
I've forgotten the music your presence creates.
The goosebumps, the twinkles
all that scintillates.

Disdain is all I feel for this dull, empty place.
When will you lift me
and gift me away?

In the dark and cold night
I will travel away but
will find my way back
day after day.

Why am I here? Why do I stay?
Why is it dark every single dark day?

Come Mr. Sun and carry me away!
When will you lift me and gift me away?

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Olive
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Location: Buffalo NY

Re: Good Morning Sunshine

Postby Olive » Tue Feb 06, 2018 11:50 pm

This kinda hits the nail on the head, I feel, of a very particular shade of helplessness. Maybe like the kind that’s sits in the back of your mind all day. I’m not sure if that makes sense heh but asking is something I do a lot. Just asking the world quietlynin my mind.

Thank you for sharing :) your poems are nice. I like how tournaments rhymed place and creates. The internal rhyme just surprised me and was really cool I had to read it a couple times :)


*snaps fingers while wearin a black beret*
~Olive


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