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Post Midnight thoughts

Postby PixieArmy » Sat Jan 31, 2015 3:21 am

If i was a rich woman
i would pay someone to love you while i sleep
so you wouldn't miss a moment
So you always had someone to love you

Of course that wouldn't be the same
And I don't want you to miss me
So i would have to tell them
all the wonderful things i see in you

I would have to tell them about your kind heart
about your warm smile
about your tender hands
and your amazing soul

Tell them how you save me from the dark
How you brighten up my world
How with just one word
You make me want to live again

So they could love you like i do
So they could cherish every moment with you
So they could feel lucky to be with you
To be able to see you like i do

But im no rich woman
And im a selfish one
Cuz i would not want to share you
I would not want you to stop loving me

So please wait till i wake up
Please have patience with me
forgive my short comings
My bad mood and my insecure moments

I know i got a shattered heart
An wounded body
A depressed mind
A crushed soul

But i love you with all that
Gosh, how much I love you
So baby please just wait till i wake up
Sweetheart just wait for me
To love the times we have, to like what makes us sad, to lose and say goodbye, to last until our moment comes.

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Postby 100footpole » Mon Feb 02, 2015 4:01 pm

As a science fiction fan I immediately thought of the character in the poem thinking about cloning herself.

I love

a couple of the verses:

I would have to tell them about your kind heart
about your warm smile
about your tender hands
and your amazing soul

Tell them how you save me from the dark
How you brighten up my world
How with just one word
You make me want to live again

AND

But im no rich woman
And im a selfish one
Cuz i would not want to share you
I would not want you to stop loving me

So please wait till i wake up
Please have patience with me
forgive my short comings
My bad mood and my insecure moments

What a beautiful and original thought. Thanks.


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