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Turtle
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When

Postby Turtle » Wed Dec 24, 2014 9:24 am

When I saw your pretty face
When I gave you a big hug
When I got my first kiss
That’s when I knew you were mine

When you came to see me
When you gave me a hug
When you stole my heart
That’s when love started rolling around

When you took my hand
When you said you would stay
When you gave me your word
And here I pray

That you and I will be together for
All of life

When I went to you
And you stopped me
In my tracks
I said I love you
And you said it back

I promised you I’d never go
I meant it and I kept it

When I first met you
When you first saw me
When I first hugged you
When you first kissed me
I knew you were mine
-T

Nella
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Joined: Fri Dec 19, 2014 7:07 am
Location: Newcastle, South Africa

Postby Nella » Sun Dec 28, 2014 7:53 am

This is gorgeous....
It is how I used to feel about my ex-husband, when I thought he was The One.
I hope to find a man who actually means it and will stay with me 'till death do us part'
Keep on writing - you are very good at it!

SkaterDrew
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Joined: Wed Jan 07, 2015 9:55 pm

Postby SkaterDrew » Wed Jan 07, 2015 11:30 pm

it reminds me of my first love :)


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