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when to stop saying I love you

Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2014 11:19 pm
by creaker
when i move to kiss your cheek, you pull away
when i touch your shoulder, you shrug off my hand
when i say goodnight, you don't respond
when i arrive or leave, you don't meet my eyes
when i say i love you, where do the words go?

Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2014 6:56 am
by JonsDragonEyes
I like the way you write. I hope you keep doing so. :lol:

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 1:51 am
by creaker
Thank you!

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:24 am
by 4EverMe
Hi creaker,
I read this poem a while back and I liked it.
Forgot to tell you so...

It's a small but effective expression- a lot said, but with very few words.

Re: when to stop saying I love you

Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2014 2:26 pm
by I am Larry
creaker wrote:when i move to kiss your cheek, you pull away
when i touch your shoulder, you shrug off my hand
when i say goodnight, you don't respond
when i arrive or leave, you don't meet my eyes
when i say i love you, where do the words go?


Yes. This is unlove. I have felt it before. It hurts but we see it coming.