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Voices


You say you want my poetry,
The artwork lost inside of me,
But I find none.

You ask me what's my destiny,
As if my eyes would lie to me,
I am undone.

You give me hope, just when mine fails,
A fresh spring breeze to fill my sails,
And I find hope.

You are the best and worst inside,
The little voice, that I can't hide,
With which, I can cope.

My thanks my friends inside my head,
For everything you do.
I fear I never would have found myself,
if I hadn't found you.

I really like what you wrote. I feel that way often. Thank you for sharing

Wow... I am in awe! Great rhyme scheme. Great emotion. To put it simply. It was great.

JustBlah you have wonderful writing skills saying things that you feel in a way others can relate great job thank you for sharing

Lovely, crisp, simple and beautiful.....

What else can be said. Thank you.

((((JustBlah))))