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bomkata
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my work <not to good>

Postby bomkata » Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:58 pm

set off to the side peaking over the wall he hides
everything a blur every word kept inside
the commotion of chattering tongues
dissenting the words as the come
looking for something that just isnt there
locking my self back in the hole
there is no place for me here
the ghost that haunt you scream truth aloud
the demons are coming to take you back now
you cannot hide from me im right behind your eyes
why try what brings you to the next night
suffering threw the pains you made
the chilling echos of thoughts you dare not name
of paths you dare not take
to you who stands off to the side
to you who watches as life passes you by
the world a stranger till death opens your eyes.

not sure about this i think it is a bit all over the place spelling and grammar is not my strong point<learning>

bomkata
Posts: 6
Joined: Thu Aug 30, 2012 6:39 pm

another peice. let me know what ya think

Postby bomkata » Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:05 am

time falling down so slow
tearing apart my broken soul
time spinning out of control
awakend to a life alone
time stopping there is no more
quietly knocking at heavens door
time reversing to acts not yet played
peeling away at my self hate
time jumping it can no longer wait
loud screaming as it all breaks
time dieing as it closes the door
slowly draining its the end there is no more.


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