Indescribable.... poem

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jaceyka
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Indescribable.... poem

Postby jaceyka » Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:34 am

[an attempt for a love poem x.x feedback please, thanks <3]

With a love that’s indescribable, so endearing and so true;
My eyes gleam a flame, bright and strong.
A divine violet atmosphere, a color t’which can only bloom,
While the sunset of the night sky, sings its song.
Or with the warmth of the autumn trees: painted, and poised to perfection;
Tangibly dipped, in tuscan oranges and apple reds.
With some sheer leaves still showing fine greenery for the season,
Stand intertwined and weaved to silent honey suckle beds.
Or to the cashmeres of the lilies: standing firmly and profound,
Just as the white picket fence put out on display.
I place my head upon your shoulder, sweet darling that I adore,
Every fear has now been melted, and cast out, further away-
Than the ocean’s pit of oblivion, where sorry souls hold their solitude,
And groan, for their dwindled hearts dismay.
Filled with anguish, pure sorrow, carelessness and slight pity;
Raped and vulnerable, to the depths of decay.
But not I, my dearest, no more tears shall be exploited,
For you have taken out the severe shards of pain;
And replaced the sufferings cell, with a never ending power,
Providing serenity, which inside of our hearts, shall remain

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