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MechanicalFlesh
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Morbid Diary Entry

Postby MechanicalFlesh » Sun Jan 02, 2011 8:18 pm

Sickly obsessive compulsions

Dwelling in careless secrecy

Insubstancial evidence to show

A hopefully nescisarry inconsistancy

To the encircling force of inprisonment

Broken tools held by the imagined

Yearning wishfully

For the foretold path

To ascend anew

Powerful enough

To effortlessly reject the harsh difference

Which taught wisdom

Through inexperience and observation

Composing a melodramatic melody

Structuring meloncholey degeneration

Refusing simplistic memories of desire

Instilled from the primordal damnation

Never ever standing a fair chance

Against the onslaught of dumbfounding odds

Sorrowful dismay pleas

To the miscellianious outcomes

Empty of reason or answers

The slow to die

Shall painfully wonder

As existance remains furiously eternal

Joyfully murdered and recycled

Into yet another reincarnation

Plagued to consist of pieces

Thought to be left in history

Diseased to never rest

Never tire

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crystalgaze
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Postby crystalgaze » Sat Jan 08, 2011 5:32 am

I thought it was very powerful. Keep on with it!

Alice89
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Postby Alice89 » Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:45 pm

I really like it its well worded and flows well or whatever it was a powerful peice anyway keep up the great work :)

pragecy
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Postby pragecy » Tue Aug 23, 2011 5:41 am

What is atrialateral depression of the atrium? I had a stress test because of heart pulpations. I have Ischemia ( oxygen-starved) and Atrialateral depression. I did not get a clear view of what it ment.
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