First time iv'e tried to make poetry/Rhymes...

[Atheist]

Be aware that this is my very first time doing this, but it all came from my heart and i hope somone likes it


Im'a play russian roulette, lets see what i get/
Please place youre bets, this is for my last debt/
You see how i roll, my only way out of the cold/
It's to late to feel sold, i already lost my soul..
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All these fears in me, makes my tears real to see/
The way it makes me feel, is to surreal for me/
This is scaring me, now the world can see..


*hides*

[hollyann]

((((((((((Athiest)))))))))))) that it came from your heart is what matters and it is good. I hope that you continue writing it can be such a release. Hugs my friend.

Holly

[Atheist]

(((((((((((holly))))))))))))

[WOMBLE]

The Heart is the only place good poetry ever comes from.
Hollys right keep writting if your moved to do so, it's a great release and a great way of expressing how/what you feel.
Womble.